Lee BrennerThe Brand, last two sentences:"Within that selection" is a little unclear to me, and maybe combine into one paragraph?1 min read·Jun 21, 2023----
Lee BrennerThe Brand, paragraph 4 and final sentence:These feel a little orphaned and disjointed because of the surrounding imagery. What about:1 min read·Jun 21, 2023----
Lee BrennerThe Brand, paragraph 2:add a comma -> "the handwritten script, aka the signature."1 min read·Jun 21, 2023----
Lee BrennerStylescapes, paragraph 1:"How does this visual direction carry our story?"1 min read·Jun 21, 2023----
Lee BrennerNote: Just a suggestion, feel free to ignore.Moodboards Section:1 min read·Jun 21, 2023----
Lee BrennerProject Thrasher, paragraph one:"...contribute their ideas to the early stages of the brand's development" to avoid reuse of the word "process" in the sentence.1 min read·Jun 21, 2023----