Lee BrennerThe Brand, last two sentences:"Within that selection" is a little unclear to me, and maybe combine into one paragraph?Jun 21, 2023Jun 21, 2023
Lee BrennerThe Brand, paragraph 4 and final sentence:These feel a little orphaned and disjointed because of the surrounding imagery. What about:Jun 21, 2023Jun 21, 2023
Lee BrennerThe Brand, paragraph 2:add a comma -> "the handwritten script, aka the signature."Jun 21, 2023Jun 21, 2023
Lee BrennerStylescapes, paragraph 1:"How does this visual direction carry our story?"Jun 21, 2023Jun 21, 2023
Lee BrennerProject Thrasher, paragraph one:"...contribute their ideas to the early stages of the brand's development" to avoid reuse of the word "process" in the sentence.Jun 21, 2023Jun 21, 2023
